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time to fill this blog something


After I now geflätzt all evening on Bruno's sofa, my favorite multivitamin juice from a noble, ancient Cognac (?) glass geschlüft have, must go the noble world finally to ground, and had me a movie about blogging and cooking ("Julie & Julia") is regarded, I decided that I might finally my blog should use something other than writing in other blogs comments. Comments on other blogs I write anyway rare. I do not know why ...
My life is not very exciting and I am aware. So I would blog about something that I enjoy: writing. More specifically, writing a small, insignificant Final Fantasy VII fan fiction.

arises here is my fanfic blog .

As for writing fanfiction, I am, we see the truth in the face, a beginner.
"The Fugitive" is my very first fanfic ever.
That does not mean that I am a beginner when it comes to the writing itself. I usually write originals. And actually I had a firm resolution: "I do not write fanfiction.
If anyone reading this here: Please do not ask why. I can not explain it.
now to see how much is, I've thrown this principle to the winds.
The first chapter is finished and available in several archives online, I get almost no comments, I am, however, from my originals but somehow used to it.
type Currently I am the second chapter. And I am terribly upset.

First there the problem of the title .

I can not find a. I type quite a while now and while it tracks are for me Chapters 3, 4, 8, 9 and 11 occurred, but none for second chapter
is in the chapter about that Mehriye, my e Mary-Sue OC and protagonist, her first day with the Turks lived. Lots of exciting happened honestly do not. The chapter is more or less just to create a bit of room for character relationships. I for one am afraid it will be boring. My friend Bruno is eager to assure me the opposite and I am inclined to believe him.
Even when friends are bad critics as a rule, I have the feeling that it really with my friends are well taken. Of course, Bruno and Lui are not professionals in terms of criticizing, but they point me out honestly, if my logic is lagging, something is not quite clear my stuff or I, as so often, simply do not read carefully enough before I print it and those stupid, annoying spelling errors have it.
Prev 2 to Luc Chapter So as it is called a chapter that is only partially relevant Storywise? "The first day?" Lets face it, my dear reader ... imaginary That sounds stupid! Especially when you consider that the other 5 Chapter titles which have crept into my brain while writing, somehow sounding almost artistic value. To put it in front: No, it is not my claim that the chapter title should be artistically valuable. You must promise me that they have ... You have to sound like something for me. I need to hear it and say "YES! That is exactly I was looking ..."
Any suggestions would be welcomed.

The second problem I have is this:

On the length it comes to that.

course, I do not mean the male genitals, but of course the length of the chapter.
too short chapters are shit. For too long, too. Of course, "too short" and "too long" a question of definition. Between 3,000 and 5,000 words, it shows my experience, I personally feel to be optimal.
3,000 words match the way, about 5 pages (Times New Roman, font size 12). Maybe it's only 4.5 pages care.
And that's precisely the number of pages, is the chapter has grown to two previously. 5. FIVE! And I arrived storytelling until the morning break! The chapter is huge. I guess I'll write another 5 or until I come to a conclusion. The circuit breaker on Animexx I feel damn sorry. I hope chapter 2 is not only quantitatively but also qualitatively with the average Animexx-FF are, so that there can not read about it too unpleasant side effects (such as headdesk-related concussion) is .

problem number 3:

Yes, I'm kind of flutes, the good old motivation. Perhaps it is because two out of three are comments from my friends. Maybe it's something else. I do not know what it is ...
I resolve to write and then I make it something else ... That bugs me. Why am I not there when it annoys me but that I did not do it? The results however did not make any sense?
It bugs me so that I even dream of it!
I recently dreamed someone had accused me via comment that act Fanfic " disinterested.
I maintain also:'s annoying me that I write elegant and it will not do it. Even my subconscious is annoyed about how I should explain this oblique dream differently?
And yet I do not.
understanding a women * roll eyes *